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Good show, navagational needs some tweeking.

I'm sorry I haven't give a more proper reivew than I ususally, do, but I just wanted to give my 2 cents in on this piece.

Overall it is a very well done movie and I greatly antisipate furture episodes.

I do have a few notes about the navagational system:

For the title screen (Scene Selection & Play funtions), you should remove the 'Skip Intro' button. Since the button serves no purpous, it only adds to clutter and has an air of unperfessionalism.

Since your flash presentation was under a standard DVD movie style, your secene selection should also include a quick link to the credits. Yes, people actaully do want to advance to the credits quickly.

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Big ups to you and your crew! I shall be watching your carrer with great interest.

smokeshow responds:

hmmm yes good review, I agree with you what you said about the credits, it's somthen I realized after I uploaded... I had a fairly long debate about the SKIP INTRO button in my mind and I even took it off and put it back on... it does serve a purpose, if you click it right away it takes you right to the PLAY and SCENE selection, I know I've watched a few movies where there is an intro and I just wanna skip it cause I've seen it so many times, and I thought this movie has replay value so users would get sick of watching the long assed intro over and over so I put it back in... it works :)

A piece that has a good solid structure.

I very much liked this work and enjoyed it greatly. Not many people post up works that have a cohesent story, so this piece was certainly a delight.

A few comments: Your cinamatography was wonderful, there are just a few things that needed to be cleaned up. Great work with the opening scene.

Loading screen is a good idea, but the bytes loaded text should be stable. It's a bit anoying to try and follow it around the screen.

Sound works. There's not much need for anything else in this piece.

Some of the text bubbles went a bit too quickly. Make sure the view has enough time to read it.

In all, it was a great pleasure viewing your piece. I hope that this is the start of more wonderful works.

Academically trained game developer making video games with computers.

Age 42, Male

Game Developer

Emerson College

Oakland, CA

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